If you could be a celebrity, what would you want to do : sing, dance, act, model, or host? why?

2026-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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If I were a celebrity, I would want to be musical actor. I like sing a song. ( but don’t do well.) And I always dream living another person’s life. I also musical dramas. I feel grateful when I see their motions and describtions. So, I sometimes said to my husband that I could be an musical actor, if I had outgoing charictoristics. Then he said like that “You are not late. There are many senior actors who doesn’t have long experiences on stages these days.”

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If I were a celebrity, I would want to be musical actor.

>> If I were a celebrity, I would want to be a musical actor.

I like sing a song. ( but don’t do well.)
>> I like to sing, but I’m not very good at it.

OR >> I enjoy singing, although I’m not skilled.

And I always dream living another person’s life.
>> I always dream of living another person’s life.

OR >> I often imagine what it would be like to live someone else’s life.

I also musical dramas.
>> I also enjoy musical dramas.

OR >> I like musical dramas as well.

I feel grateful when I see their motions and describtions.
>> I feel grateful when I see their movements and expressions.

OR >> I feel appreciation when I watch their acting and expressions.

So, I sometimes said to my husband that I could be an musical actor, if I had outgoing charictoristics.
>> So, I sometimes say to my husband that I could be a musical actor if I had an outgoing personality.

OR >> I sometimes tell my husband that I could become a musical actor if I were more outgoing.

Then he said like that “You are not late. There are many senior actors who doesn’t have long experiences on stages these days.”

>> Then he said, “You are not late. There are many senior actors these days who don’t have much stage experience.”

OR >> My husband said, “You’re not late; lots of senior actors don’t have extensive experience on stage these days.”

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