If you could be an animal, what would you be?
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Hi, Mr. [이름]! Thanks for your answer. If you would be a dog, I think you would be a Bull Terrier because that breed has small eyes like you. ^^
Anyway, that book you mentioned seems very interesting. I think I\'ll try reading it myself. Have a great Thursday! ^^
~T.Avery
I haven\'t thought of becoming an animal and I don\'t have a favorite animal.
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I have learnt that the monkey is human\'s ancestors.
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OR>> I have learnt that our ancestors originated from apes.
It looks like that they have brain so they can think and act.
>> It looks like that they have brains so they can think and act.
That\'s the reason why I would like to be a monkey.
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The other animals I want to become is a dog because dogs are the best loved animal from human.
>> The other animal I want to become is a dog because dogs are the best-loved animals by humans.
Dogs look like that they have no worries.
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They can sleep whenever they feel tired and play anytime without the permission that is different to children.
>> Unlike children, they can sleep whenever they feel tired and play anytime without permission.
I have seen novel titled cats wrote from famous writer, Bernard Werber.
>> I have seen a novel entitled \"Cats\" written by the famous writer, Bernard Werber.
This is about a cat that think human is its animals.
>> This is about a cat that thinks human is its animal.
This is the ideas nobody thought about before.
>> These are the ideas nobody thought about before.
I really enjoyed reading this book but I didn\'t read it completely.
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I will tell you about the story in detail once I read it completely.
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