If you could be an animal, what would you be?

2020-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Avery

학생이 쓴 원문

I haven\'t thought of becoming an animal and I don\'t have a favorite animal. I have learnt that the monkey is human\'s ancestors. It looks like that they have brain so they can think and act. That\'s the reason why I would like to be a monkey. The other animals I want to become is a dog because dogs are the best loved animal from human. Dogs look like that they have no worries. They can sleep whenever they feel tired and play anytime without the permission that is different to children. I have seen novel titled cats wrote from famous writer, Bernard Werber. This is about a cat that think human is its animals. This is the ideas nobody thought about before. I really enjoyed reading this book but I didn\'t read it completely. I will tell you about the story in detail once I read it completely.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Mr. [이름]! Thanks for your answer. If you would be a dog, I think you would be a Bull Terrier because that breed has small eyes like you. ^^

Anyway, that book you mentioned seems very interesting. I think I\'ll try reading it myself. Have a great Thursday! ^^

~T.Avery

I haven\'t thought of becoming an animal and I don\'t have a favorite animal.

>> CORRECT

I have learnt that the monkey is human\'s ancestors.

>> CORRECT

OR>> I have learnt that our ancestors originated from apes.

It looks like that they have brain so they can think and act.

>> It looks like that they have brains so they can think and act.

That\'s the reason why I would like to be a monkey.

>> CORRECT

The other animals I want to become is a dog because dogs are the best loved animal from human.

>> The other animal I want to become is a dog because dogs are the best-loved animals by humans.

Dogs look like that they have no worries.

>> CORRECT

They can sleep whenever they feel tired and play anytime without the permission that is different to children.

>> Unlike children, they can sleep whenever they feel tired and play anytime without permission.

I have seen novel titled cats wrote from famous writer, Bernard Werber.

>> I have seen a novel entitled \"Cats\" written by the famous writer, Bernard Werber.

This is about a cat that think human is its animals.

>> This is about a cat that thinks human is its animal.

This is the ideas nobody thought about before.

>> These are the ideas nobody thought about before.

I really enjoyed reading this book but I didn\'t read it completely.

>> CORRECT

I will tell you about the story in detail once I read it completely.

>> CORRECT

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