If you could be another man or woman for a day, who would you choose to become?

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I would like to become Bill Gates for a day. 

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He is known as the world\'s second richest man. 

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By his uncountable enormous money, I would like to buy everything I wanted to get. 

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For example, I could dress up with luxury clothes and accessories. 

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While traveling around the world and spending a lot of money, everyone I meet will know my value and treat me preciously or at least say something like \"It\'s a great honor to meet you\". 

>> While traveling around the world and spending a lot of money, everyone I meet will know my value and treat me preciously or at least say something like, \"It\'s a great honor to meet you\". 

The only thing I should do is to enjoy my popularity. 

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I could also feel the feeling of living with an extraordinary brain, and learn lots of things from genius thinking process that Bill Gates has. 

>> I could also feel the feeling of living with an extraordinary brain, and learn lots of things from the genius thinking process that Bill Gates has. 

Also, Bill Gates will have no lack of speaking English, which is my weekness. 

>> Also, Bill Gates will have no lack in speaking English, which is my weakness. 

Living as a rich, honorable, and genius for a day will be very nice experience.

>> Living as a rich, honorable, and genius for a day will be a very nice experience.

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