If you could be another person for a day, who would you be?
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I would like to be a minister/secretary who works government. If I take a place to this position, I will look around and take care of the alienated class of people. A social scale is depends on money due to a capitalistic society, nevertheless, we should concern about others. Could I will be this sort of person someday?
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I would like to be a minister/secretary who works government.
>>I would like to be a minister/secretary who works for the government.
If I take a place to this position, I will look around and take care of the alienated class of people.
>>If I take this position, I will look around and take care of the alienated class of people.
A social scale is depends on money due to a capitalistic society, nevertheless, we should concern about others.
>> A social scale depends on money due to a capitalistic society, nevertheless, we should be concerned about the well being of others.
Could I will be this sort of person someday?
>>Could I be this sort of person someday?
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