If you could be another person for a day, who would you be?
학생이 쓴 원문
I would like to be a millionaire, if I be a millionaire, I can do anything whatever I want, and will spend a lot of money. To be a millionaire is awesomw to think only.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
I would like to be a millionaire,
>>CORRECT
if I be a millionaire, I can do anything whatever I want, and will spend a lot of money.
>>If I will be a millionaire, I can do anything, whatever I want, and I will spend a lot of my money.
To be a millionaire is awesomw to think only.
>>To be a millionaire is awesome but I can only think about it.
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