If you could be another person for a day, who would you be?
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I want to be a person who works in slime cafe. Because I can make slime all day and if I make slime in my room I have to clean my room after playing with slime. However if I play with slime in slime cafe I don\'t have to clean it. Because I just be a person who works in their just one day. Also, I think I can be person who go to the slime cafe. Thank you for listening my presentation.
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Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
I want to be a person who works in slime cafe.
>>CORRECT
Because I can make slime all day and if I make slime in my room I have to clean my room after playing with slime.
>>CORRECT
However if I play with slime in slime cafe I don\'t have to clean it.
>>CORRECT
Because I just be a person who works in their just one day.
>>Because, I will just be a person who works there in a day.
Also, I think I can be person who go to the slime cafe.
>>Also, I think I can be a person who goes to the slime cafe.
Thank you for listening my presentation.
>> Thank you for listening to my presentation.
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