If you could be any animal for a day, what would it be and why?
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If I could be any animal for a day, I would be a bird.
It will be nice to fly through the sky freely.
And I want to be a peacock among all birds.
Because I think a peacock is one of the most beautiful birds.
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Hello [이름]! :)
And I want to be a peacock among all birds.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
If I could be any animal for a day, I would be a bird.
>> If I could be an animal for a day, I would be a bird.
It will be nice to fly through the sky freely.
>> CORRECT!
And I want to be a peacock among all birds.
>> And among all birds, I would like to be a peacock
Because I think a peacock is one of the most beautiful birds.
>> Because I think peacock is one of the most beautiful birds.
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