If you could be anyone in the world, who would you be? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I could be anyone then I want to be a talented person. A ballerina or a figure skater is good to be one. Also, someone who can play all kinds of instrument will be great as well. I want to be a smart person too. It seems like that I want to be a multiple talented smart person. Because I\'m not a smart person and I don\'t have special talent. But I know that the most important thing is my health. As long as I\'m healthy enough in spiritually and physically then I believe that I could be anyone I wanted to be.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!^^
Thank you for always practicing your writing and grammar skills. Great job! Just be careful with your punctuation marks. I think almost all people want to be multi-talented and I\'m one of them. ^_^
If I could be anyone then I want to be a talented person.
>>>If I could be anyone, then I want to be a talented person.
A ballerina or a figure skater is good to be one.
>>>A ballerina or a figure skater is good to be one.
Also, someone who can play all kinds of instrument will be great as well.
>>>Also, someone who can play all kinds of instrument would be great as well.
It seems like that I want to be a multiple talented smart person.
>>> It seems like I want to be a multiple talented person.
Because I\'m not a smart person and I don\'t have special talent.
>>>It\'s because I\'m not a smart person and I don\'t have special talent.
As long as I\'m healthy enough in spiritually and physically then I believe that I could be anyone I wanted to be.
>>> As long as I\'m healthy enough spiritually and physically, then I believe that I could be anyone I wanted to be.
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