If you could be anywhere right now where would you be?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I could be anywhere I right I want to stay in Europe because I\'m very tired so I want to rest in Mt. Alps and I want to eat cheese.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s another corrected composition, Yale! Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. Have a good night\'s sleep!
Cheers,
Jean~~
If you could be anywhere right now where would you be?
If I could be anywhere I right I want to stay in Europe because I\'m very tired so I want to rest in Mt. Alps and I want to eat cheese.
>> If I could be anywhere right now, I would want to be in Europe because I\'m very tired so I want to rest in Mt. Alps and eat cheese.
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