If you could be famous, would you? What would you want to be famous for?
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I won\'t be famous. If I am famous, I have to do everything more carefully. And, if I do some mistakes, everyone will blame me. I don\'t want to live like it.
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I won\'t be famous.
>> correct
If I am famous, I have to do everything more carefully.
>> But if I were famous, I would have to do everything more carefully.
And, if I do some mistakes, everyone will blame me.
>> And if I made mistakes, everyone would blame me.
I don\'t want to live like it.
>> I don\'t want to live like that.
>> or: I don\'t want to live that kind of life.
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