If you could be invisible for a couple of hours, what would you do or accomplish?
학생이 쓴 원문
Wow, it\'s one of the most interesting questions that I was asked to answer recently.
Above all, I want to be in conversation of my acquaintances or even family about me. I don\'t want to talk about others behind their backs or I don\'t want others to gossip about me behind my back. However, sometimes I want to know about how they think of and talk about me behind my back.
Second, I want to visit the President’s office where big men go over big things in Korea. I believe news can only show superficial results, not truth behind the scenes.
Third, I want to overhear the meeting to decide on a big investment to get lots of money by investing beforehand. If I could do it, making a lot of money must be a piece of cake.
Thanks to some pleasant worries that you made me have, I could relieve stress for a moment. Thanks.
Anyway, I am more down to earth than imagining in vain. I get back to the real world where I live.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Steve! ^^,)
You\'ve participated well in class today. I really appreciate your effort to answer all of my queries.
Thank you for finding time to accomplish your homework. I have made some modifications.
If you have questions, we\'ll talk about about them tomorrow. Have a good night!^^
__Teacher Mayleen :)
Wow, it\'s one of the most interesting questions that I was asked to answer recently.
>>> Wow, this is one of the most interesting questions that I\'ve been asked to answer recently.
Above all, I want to be in conversation of my acquaintances or even family about me.
Above all, I want to be in conversation of my acquaintances or even family about me.
>>> Above all, I want to know what my acquaintances or even family members think about me.
I don\'t want to talk about others behind their backs or I don\'t want others to gossip about me behind my back.
>>> I don\'t want to talk about others behind their backs as I don\'t want others to gossip about me behind my back.
However, sometimes I want to know about how they think of and talk about me behind my back.
>>> However, sometimes I want to know what they think of me and talk about me behind my back.
>>> OR: On the other hand, there are moments when I want to know what they think of me and how they perceive me.
Second, I want to visit the President’s office where big men go over big things in Korea.
Second, I want to visit the President’s office where big men go over big things in Korea.
>>> Second, I want to visit the President’s office, where influential people go over big issues in Korea.
I believe news can only show superficial results, not truth behind the scenes.
>>> I believe that the media can only show superficial results, but not the truth behind the scenes.
Third, I want to overhear the meeting to decide on a big investment to get lots of money by investing beforehand.
Third, I want to overhear the meeting to decide on a big investment to get lots of money by investing beforehand.
>>> Third, I want to overhear a meeting about a big investment where I can get lots of money by investing beforehand.
If I could do it, making a lot of money must be a piece of cake.
>>> CORRECT
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: Making a lot of money must be simple if I could accomplish it.
Thanks to some pleasant worries that you made me have, I could relieve stress for a moment. Thanks.
>>> Thanks to some pleasant words that you told me earlier, I was able to relieve my stress for a moment.
Anyway, I am more down to earth than imagining in vain. I get back to the real world where I live.
Anyway, I am more down to earth than imagining in vain. I get back to the real world where I live.
>>> In any case, I am more grounded than to waste time daydreaming. I will get back to my home in the real world.
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