If you could be invisible for a day what would you do and why?

2017-11-01 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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If I am invisible for one day. I would like to walk with Lion. The King of an animal. Powerful beast ever. It would be a fascinating experience. A slow walk with the king of an animal. I would like to take a walk with Lion. I want to feel lion`s breath and the power within a meter. I would like to sleep aside lion. I would like to eat food besides lion. I would like to run with a lion. I would like to spend my whole day with the king of an animal.

강사 첨삭



Hi Lion! How\'s your day going?

Wow, your answer is something I didn\'t expect, but it made a lot of sense.

Your English name is Lion, after all. Hehe^-^

By the way, did you know that Lions have a strong sense of smell?

A lion might not be able to see you, but it doesn\'t mean it wouldn\'t eat you if you stay beside  it.  Haha!  I\'m just kidding!


See you tonight!


Amanda ^-^



If I am invisible for one day. I would like to walk with Lion.

>> If I could be invisible for one day, I would like to walk with a Lion.

The King of an animal. Powerful beast ever. It would be a fascinating experience.

>> Lion is the king of animals, it\'s a powerful beast. It would be a fascinating experience.

A slow walk with the king of an animal. I would like to take a walk with Lion. I want to feel lion`s breath and the power within a meter. 

>> A slow walk with the king of animals would be great. I want to feel it\'s breath and power within one meter distance.

I would like to sleep aside lion. I would like to eat food besides lion. I would like to run with a lion.

>> I would also like to sleep and eat beside the lion, then run with it if I could.

I would like to spend my whole day with the king of an animal.

>> I would like to spend my whole day with the king of animals.  

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