If you could be join any competition, what would it be? Why?
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If I join any competition, I want to join baseball competition. I practiced baseball very much. So, I want to join baseball competition. Finally, my hope is winning the competition.
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If I join any competition, I want to join baseball competition.
>> If I can join any competition, I would join a baseball competition.
I practiced baseball very much.
>> I practice baseball hard.
So, I want to join baseball competition.
>> So, I want to join a baseball competition.
Finally, my hope is winning the competition.
>> Finally, my hope is to win the competition.
>> or: I hope to win the competition.
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