If you could break the Guinness Book of Records it would be for?

2015-09-21 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Thinking about what I’m good at, I am not competitive enough to set a world record in any of the areas. I can strive to rank the top 10% of any competitions such as sports games or academic fields. However, in order to break the Guinness Book of Records, I should be number one on the globe. If I just wish to be number one regardless of my real competency, I would like to a make a world record in the mental calculation or memorizing something quickly. If you can add, subtract, multiply and divide large numbers that are more than a single digit in your head, you don’t need a calculator and you will be called a genius. Moreover, when you go to a casino and do a gambling, you can easily win and earn money. It will be also wonderful if I can read a book fast and memorize the contents of the book fully. Let’s say you can read a 300 paged book within 10 minutes and understand the contents completely, you can shorten the time to prepare for exams or do researches. They are just a dream.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Sir [이름]!

Happy Monday!

How was your weekend?

I hope that you had enough rest.

It is really nice if we can read a 300 paged book within 10 minutes.

I hope we could do that. ^^ Hihihi.

Have a great day.

Teacher Nina


Thinking about what I’m good at, I am not competitive enough to set a world record in any of the areas.

>> correct

I can strive to rank the top 10% of any competitions such as sports games or academic fields.

>> correct

However, in order to break the Guinness Book of Records, I should be number one on the globe.

>> correct

If I just wish to be number one regardless of my real competency, I would like to a make a world record in the mental calculation or memorizing something quickly.

>> correct

If you can add, subtract, multiply and divide large numbers that are more than a single digit in your head, you don’t need a calculator and you will be called a genius.

>> correct

Moreover, when you go to a casino and do a gambling, you can easily win and earn money.

>> Better: Moreover, when you go to a casino and do gambling, you can easily win and earn money.

It will be also wonderful if I can read a book fast and memorize the contents of the book fully.

>> correct

Let’s say you can read a 300 paged book within 10 minutes and understand the contents completely, you can shorten the time to prepare for exams or do researches.

>> correct

They are just a dream.

>> correct

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