If you could break the Guinness Book of Records it would be for?
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Hi there Sir [이름]!
Happy Monday!
How was your weekend?
I hope that you had enough rest.
It is really nice if we can read a 300 paged book within 10 minutes.
I hope we could do that. ^^ Hihihi.
Have a great day.
Teacher Nina
Thinking about what I’m good at, I am not competitive enough to set a world record in any of the areas.
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I can strive to rank the top 10% of any competitions such as sports games or academic fields.
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However, in order to break the Guinness Book of Records, I should be number one on the globe.
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If I just wish to be number one regardless of my real competency, I would like to a make a world record in the mental calculation or memorizing something quickly.
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If you can add, subtract, multiply and divide large numbers that are more than a single digit in your head, you don’t need a calculator and you will be called a genius.
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Moreover, when you go to a casino and do a gambling, you can easily win and earn money.
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It will be also wonderful if I can read a book fast and memorize the contents of the book fully.
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Let’s say you can read a 300 paged book within 10 minutes and understand the contents completely, you can shorten the time to prepare for exams or do researches.
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They are just a dream.
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