If you could change any aspect of your personality, what would it be? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to change my personality.
hmm, a heart of too much for the other person.
Later I was disappointed and hurt from this matter.
but, I love myself as I am.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! I like that you provided details. Thank you.
Until the next one!
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~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
hmm, a heart of too much for the other person.
>>My heart loved a person too much.
Later I was disappointed and hurt from this matter.
>>CORRECT
but, I love myself as I am.
>>CORRECT
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