If you could change any aspect of your personality, what would it be?
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I want to change perfectionism, one of my personality. Perfectionism is a kind of obsession, so that makes me tired. I have a lot of responsibility associated with me. I always suffer from lack of sleep, and say to me, \'Hurry up\'. Sometimes, ironically, I can\'t do what I have to, because I have too many works to do. That works include what I make and what someone gives to me. Therefore, I want to take some rests and get relaxed. I am trying to say to me, \'It\'s okay\'.
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Hello [이름]. Great job for diligently doing your homework.
~Teacher Aki ^^
I want to change perfectionism, one of my personality.
>> One of my personalities that I want to change is being a \"perfectionist\"
Perfectionism is a kind of obsession, so that makes me tired.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> Being a little obsessed with \"perfectionism\" makes me tired.
I have a lot of responsibility associated with me. I always suffer from lack of sleep, and say to me, \'Hurry up\'.
>> There\'s a lot of responsibilities assigned to me and I always have sleepless nights that even sometimes I could hear someone asking me to \"hurry up\"
Sometimes, ironically, I can\'t do what I have to, because I have too many works to do.
>> CORRECT
OR>> I sometimes, can\'t even do what I have to do due to loads of work.
That works include what I make and what someone gives to me.
>> Those include my personal job and the assigned ones.
OR>> Those include my personal job and someone asking for a favor.
Therefore, I want to take some rests and get relaxed. I am trying to say to me, \'It\'s okay\'.
>> I just want to get some rest and be relaxed, so I always tell myself that \"It\'s okay\".
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