If you could change any aspect of your personality, what would it be? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I can change my personality, I want to change my lazy personality. Because, I want to have lots of what I want to do somethings but I don\'t do it generally. If I do somethings, I just do it only two or three times. Like diet or study.. I think If I can change it, I will have good at English. So I want to chage my lazy personality.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Eliana! ^^
I really hope you\'ll achieve your wish~ ^^
Fighting!
I really hope you\'ll achieve your wish~ ^^
Fighting!
- T. Rina
1. If I can change my personality, I want to change my lazy personality.
>> If I could change something about my personality, it would be my laziness.
2. Because, I want to have lots of what I want to do somethings but I don\'t do it generally.
>> Because I want to do a lot of things, but I don\'t generally do them.
3. If I do somethings, I just do it only two or three times. Like diet or study..
>> If I do something, I just do it for only two to three times, like going on a diet or studying.
4. I think If I can change it, I will have good at English.
>> I think if I can change it, I will be good at English.
5. So I want to chage my lazy personality.
>> So, I want to change my lazy personality.
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