If you could change any aspect of your personality, what would it be?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to change my personality.
Because I\'m easily angre to my boyfriend and family.
So, I want to change my anger to kindness.
If I could change any aspect of my personality, my my boyfriend and family would love me more than now.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
I want to change my personality.
>>CORRECT
Because I\'m easily angre to my boyfriend and family.
>>Because I\'m easily angered by my boyfriend and family.
So, I want to change my anger to kindness.
>>CORRECT
If I could change any aspect of my personality, my my boyfriend and family would love me more than now.
>> If I could change any aspect of my personality, my boyfriend and my family would love me more than now.
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