If you could change any aspect of your personality, what would it be?
학생이 쓴 원문
If i could change my personality, I want to get faithfulness and compassion.
Because i\'m lazy and heartless.
So i try to work hard for everything in my life.
But it\'s not easy however i try and try.
Someday i will arrive at faithfulness.
Next i want a warm heart.
Loving family or friend is easy.
but when we live in our life, we met uncongenial people.
Bible told us to love enemy.
It\'s really difficult.
So i pray to God about that \"please give me a compassion\".
강사 첨삭
Happy Thursday Simon! Thank you for always doing your homework. I always have a great time reading your homework. It also teaches me a lot of things. Keep on practicing! See you tomorrow.
~Teacher Sheila :)
If i could change my personality, I want to get faithfulness and compassion.
>>If I could change my personality, I want to get faithfulness and compassion.
OR>>If I want to change my personality, I want to be faithful and compassionate.
Because i\'m lazy and heartless.
Because i\'m lazy and heartless.
>>Because I think I\'m lazy and heartless.
So i try to work hard for everything in my life.
>>So I try to work hard for everything in my life.
OR>>So, I try to work to have everything I need in my life.
But it\'s not easy however i try and try.
>>Even how much I try it\'s not easy.
OR>>It\'s not easy even how hard I try.
Someday i will arrive at faithfulness.
>>Someday, I will be faithful.
OR>>Someday, I will achieved faithfulness.
Next i want a warm heart.
>>Next, I want to have a warm heart.
Loving family or friend is easy.
>>Loving my family and friend is easy.
but when we live in our life, we met uncongenial people.
>>But part of living is we may meet uncongenial people.
Bible told us to love enemy.
>>Bible told us to love our enemy.
OR>>Bible told us to love the enemy.
It\'s really difficult.
>>CORRECT
OR>>It\'s really hard.
So i pray to God about that \"please give me a compassion\".
>>So I pray to God that \"Please give me compassion.\"
OR>>So I pray to God to give me compassion.
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