If you could change any aspect of your personality, what would it be?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear Teacher Sheila!
Happy Monday Teacher Sheila!
Thank you for understood me. I will do my best.
Today\'s recommended song is \'When i dream\'. I feeling relax because listened a sweet melody.
Homework
If you could change any aspect of your personality, what would it be?
I hope be positive and proactive attitudes. I have a lot in thinking. It\'s a my weakness. I will improve it.
강사 첨삭
Hello Tony! Thank you for recommending a song for me to listen. I will listen to it after going to sleep.
Until the next one!
See you in class! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila :)
>>Thank you for understanding me.
I will do my best.
>>CORRECT
>>CORRECT
Today\'s recommended song is \'When i dream\'.
>>Today\'s recommended song is \"When I dream\".
I feeling relax because listened sweet melody.
>>I feel relaxed because of listening to the sweet melody.
>>I feel relaxed because of listening to the sweet melody.
I hope be positive and proactive attitudes.
>>I hope to be a positive and to have proactive attitude.
I have a lot in mind.
>>CORRECT
It\'s a my weakness.
>>It\'s one of my weaknesses.
OR>>It\'s my weakness.
I will improve it.
>>CORRECT
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