If you could change anything about your country, what would you change?
학생이 쓴 원문
I hope the system to go to university will be changed.
Our country’s system have to compete with friends or other people a lot.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts! Well done! ^^
~Elica~
I hope the system to go to university will be changed.
>>I hope the system on going to the university will change.
Our country’s system have to compete with friends or other people a lot.
Our country’s system have to compete with friends or other people a lot.
>>Our country\'s system requires us to complete with friends or other people a lot.
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