If you could change anything about your country, what would you change?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I could change anything about my country, I would remove Korean age.
When we are born, we are a year old in Korea.
And even though we are on birthday, we don\'t grow a year older.
We only grow a year older on New Year\'s Day.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
When we are born, we are a year old in Korea.
And even though we are on birthday, we don\'t grow a year older.
We only grow a year older on New Year\'s Day.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
If I could change anything about my country, I would remove Korean age.
>> If I could change anything about my country, I would remove the Korean age.
When we are born, we are a year old in Korea.
>> CORRECT!
And even though we are on birthday, we don\'t grow a year older.
>> And even though it\'s our birth date, we don\'t grow a year older.
We only grow a year older on New Year\'s Day.
>> CORRECT!
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