If you could change anything about your present home, what would it be?
학생이 쓴 원문
If i could change my present home, i would be more bigger.
because my home just one room. so not seperate bedroom, livingroom.
someone said, it\'s very corfortable.but i don\'t ageed this opinion.
I just think more bigger is more comfortable.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Dan!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about your room. We do have various preferences. In my case, if I am living alone, i would like that kind of room because it is easier to clean.
Have a good weekend!
T. Aki~
If i could change my present home, i would be more bigger.
>>> I want it bigger if I could change my present home.
because my home just one room. so not seperate bedroom, livingroom.
>>> Because this is a studio-type room so there aren\'t any partitions for the bedroom and the living room.
someone said, it\'s very corfortable.but i don\'t ageed this opinion.
>>> Someone said that it looks comfortable but I don\'t agree with that opinion.
I just think more bigger is more comfortable.
>>> I think a much bigger one is more comfortable.
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