If you could change anything in your life, what would it be?
학생이 쓴 원문
it is so awesome for us to have a chance to change our mistake!
I think some mistake that i did in the past help me to be a better person.
Neverthress, i have some mistake that i want to change.
When i was a middle school, i was in adolescence. That time i was so impressive and unreasonable. I din't listen my mother opinion and i do everything by my feeling.
So, my mother felt so sad and is disappointed by my act.
In a secont thought, i regret why i did like that, so if i can go that time, i never do like this. I would do something i have to do and i also would listen my mother opinion and never stick to my opinion.
강사 첨삭
Hi there^^
Thank you for doing your homework!
Yes, it would be so awesome if we could change our mistakes!
But I think it\'s part of life. All of us commit mistakes. Nobody\'s perfect! We just have to learn from our mistakes and try to do our best not to do those mistakes again.
Anyway, I\'ll see you later^^
~T.Chelsea
it is so awesome for us to have a chance to change our mistake!
>> Do you mean, \"It would be so awesome for us to have a chance to change our mistakes!\"I think some mistake that i did in the past help me to be a better person.
>> I thnk some mistakes I did in the past helped me to be a better person.Neverthress, i have some mistake that i want to change.
>> Nevertheless, I have some mistakes that I want to change.When i was a middle school, i was in adolescence.
>> When I was a middles school student, I was in adolescence stage.
That time i was so impressive and unreasonable.
>> Do you mean, \"That time I was so unimpressive and unreasonable.\"
I din\'t listen my mother opinion and i do everything by my feeling.
>> I didn\'t listen to my mother\'s opinion and I did everything I want do.So, my mother felt so sad and is disappointed by my act.
>> So, my mother felt so sad and disappointed by my actions.In a secont thought, i regret why i did like that, so if i can go that time, i never do like this.
>> In a second thought, I regret the things I did. So if I could go turn back time, I would never do that.
I would do something i have to do and i also would listen my mother opinion and never stick to my opinion.
>> I would do something I have to do. I would also listen to my mother\'s opinion and never stick to my opinion.
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