If you could change anything in your life, what would it be?

2020-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Today’s question is “ If you could change anything in your life, what would it be”. My answer is I don’t want to change my life. Surely there is error in my life but if there was not that then I think I’m not here.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jenna!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

Today’s question is “ If you could change anything in your life, what would it be”. 

>> Today’s question is “ If you could change anything in your life, what would it be?”. 

My answer is I don’t want to change my life. 

>> My answer is, I don’t want to change anything in my life. 

Surely there is error in my life but if there was not that then I think I’m not here.

>> Surely there is an error in my life, but if there was not, then I think I would not be here.

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