If you could change anything in your life, what would it be?
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Hello Jenna!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
Today’s question is “ If you could change anything in your life, what would it be”.
>> Today’s question is “ If you could change anything in your life, what would it be?”.
My answer is I don’t want to change my life.
>> My answer is, I don’t want to change anything in my life.
Surely there is error in my life but if there was not that then I think I’m not here.
>> Surely there is an error in my life, but if there was not, then I think I would not be here.
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