If you could change careers would you consider the salary first or the job itself?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I choose my job, I concern about job itself first rather than salary. Even though, money is important, unless job fits to me, it’s very hard to work constantly.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
That is very true! I think nobody can stay in a job unless they are really interested in it. Anyway, keep up the good work and see you later in class. Thank you for your effort today! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>When I choose my job, I prioritize the job itself rather than the salary.
2. Even though, money is important, unless job fits to me, it’s very hard to work constantly.
>>Even though money is important, unless the job fits me, it’s very hard to work efficiently.
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