If you could change one law it your country, what would it be and why?
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Absolutely I want to change punishment. I don\'t understand punishment that criminals will get in South Korea. Especially, I will never understand drunk crime. If you did crime with drunk in South Korea, you can get a lesser sentence.
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Happy Friday, Elic! Learning is your super power. Remember, never stop trying, and never stop growing your brain ;)
Absolutely I want to change punishment.
>> I want to change the punishment system in my country.
I don\'t understand punishment that criminals will get in South Korea.
>> I don\'t really understand the kind of punishment that criminals get in South Korea.
Especially, I will never understand drunk crime.
>> For example, I will never understand why being drunk is considered a crime in my country.
If you did crime with drunk in South Korea, you can get a lesser sentence.
>> If you committed crime while being drunk in South Korea, you should get a lesser sentence.
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