If you could change one major historical event, what would it be?

2018-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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If I could change one major histroical event, I would change the relationship between Korean and Japan. As you already knew, they claim on Dokdo which located in East sea of Korea. So I feel somewhat uncomfortable about Japan. I will go back to the Japanese colonial rules. I am going to kill pro-japanese collaborators and japanese soldiers. Then I think We'll be living a better life now.

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If I could change one major histroical event, I would change the relationship between Korean and Japan. As you already knew, they claim on Dokdo which located in East sea of Korea. So I feel somewhat uncomfortable about Japan.
I will go back to the Japanese colonial rules. I am going to kill pro-japanese collaborators and japanese soldiers. Then I think We\'ll be living a better life now.

If I could change one major historical event, I would change the relationship between Korean and Japanese. As you already knew, they claim Dokdo to be theirs which is located in the East sea of Korea. So I feel somewhat uncomfortable about Japan.

I will go back to the Japanese colonial rules. I am going to kill pro-Japanese collaborators and Japanese soldiers. Then I think We\'ll be living a better life now.

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