If you could change one thing about your current house to make it more comfortable, what would it be
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If you could change one thing about your current house to make it more comfortable, what would it be?
I want to change the kichten in my house.
When I prepare the cook, it is inconvienent because the pace is small.
My house was bulit a long time ago, all things is very older.
That\'s why I want to change not only kitchten but also other places.
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I hope you can renovate you house so it would suit your convenience. :)
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I want to change the kichten in my house.
>> I want to change the kitchen in my house.
When I prepare the cook, it is inconvienent because the pace is small.
>>When I prepare for cooking, it is inconvenient because the space is small.
My house was bulit a long time ago, all things is very older.
>> My house was built a long time ago and everything is old.
That\'s why I want to change not only kitchten but also other places.
>> That\'s why I want to change, not only the kitchen, but also other places in my house.
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