If you could change one thing about your current house to make it more comfortable, what would it be
학생이 쓴 원문
This world is having Covid19 pandemic.
So it is hard to work out nowadays.
If there is a place that I can exercise freely, it will be very great to me.
I will able to keep my health and also if I have a situation that I can\'t go outside, I can use this place.
Also I don\'t have to go out to work out.
So if I could change one thing about my current house to make it more comfortable, I want to have a exercising place.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]:)
I hope you can renovate you house so it would suit your convenience. :)
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This world is having Covid19 pandemic.
>> This world has a COVID-19 pandemic So it is hard to work out nowadays.
So it is hard to work out nowadays.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
If there is a place that I can exercise freely, it will be very great to me.
>> If there is a place that I can exercise freely, it will be great for me.
I will able to keep my health and also if I have a situation that I can\'t go outside, I can use this place.
>> I will able to keep my health good and go outside.
Also I don\'t have to go out to work out.
>> Also, I don\'t have to go out to work out.
So if I could change one thing about my current house to make it more comfortable, I want to have a exercising place.
> So if I could change one thing about my current house to make it more comfortable, it would be having a place to exercise.
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