If you could change one thing about your current house to make it more comfortable, what would it be
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There are two things that I would like to change in my house to make it more comfortable. The first one is to make the kitchen window bigger so that I can see an outside through the window. The second one is about wires, plugs, and the set-top box in the living room. I have a 52-inch LED TV set that is directly installed on the wall in my living room. Below the TV set, there is an electric outlet where all the wires are plugged in for TV power, a WIFI router, and a TV set top box. Since there is no TV stand in my living room, all of them are placed on the living room floor below the TV set. They look messy. I can buy a TV stand to store such accessories to look neat, but my living room might look smaller because of it. So, I am seeking a way to hide all of them. If I can put them behind the TV set, it will be best, but there is no enough space behind the TV set. Another way is that I can put some vases with flowers in front of them to cover them, but it also looks awkward.
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There are two things that I would like to change in my house to make it more comfortable.
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The first one is to make the kitchen window bigger so that I can see an outside through the window.
>> The first one is to make the kitchen window bigger so that I can see outside through the window.
The second one is about wires, plugs, and the set-top box in the living room.
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>> OR: The second one is about the wires, plugs, and the set-top box in the living room.
I have a 52-inch LED TV set that is directly installed on the wall in my living room.
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Below the TV set, there is an electric outlet where all the wires are plugged in for TV power, a WIFI router, and a TV set top box.
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Since there is no TV stand in my living room, all of them are placed on the living room floor below the TV set.
>> Since there is no TV stand in my living room, all of them are placed there on floor below the TV set.
They look messy.
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I can buy a TV stand to store such accessories to look neat, but my living room might look smaller because of it.
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So, I am seeking a way to hide all of them.
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If I can put them behind the TV set, it will be best, but there is no enough space behind the TV set.
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Another way is that I can put some vases with flowers in front of them to cover them, but it also looks awkward.
>> CORRECT
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