If you could change one thing about your current house to make it more comfortable, what would it be

2020-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 Avery

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To have my own room was one of my dream when I was child. I achieved my dream but I would like to have bigger house, have it that is located in front of the beach or river that might have wonderful view and a large living room that I can install some exercise equipment now. Actually, I don\'t have good sense of arts so I don\'t usually know what I would like to change around my environment. I just follow my wife\'s opinion and she always decides the changes. One thing I want to change in my house is that install the massage machine. There should be enough space in the living room in order to install it. I also need to spend a lot of money to purchase it. The machine is one of the expensive electronics at the market. I have been dreaming of taking a rest on the massage machine and watching TV while I am getting a massage.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Mr. [이름]! How are you doing? I hope it\'s not too busy at work. Thank you for your composition!

Your massage machine sounds perfect! ^^ See you in class. ^^

~T.Avery

To have my own room was one of my dream when I was child.

>> To have my own room was one of my dreams when I was child.

I achieved my dream but I would like to have bigger house, have it that is located in front of the beach or river that might have wonderful view and a large living room that I can install some exercise equipment now.

>> I achieved my dream but I would like to have a bigger house, which is located in front of the beach or river that might have a wonderful view and a large living room where I can install some exercise equipment.

Actually, I don\'t have good sense of arts so I don\'t usually know what I would like to change around my environment.

>> Actually, I don\'t have a good sense of the arts so I don\'t usually know what I would like to change around my environment.

I just follow my wife\'s opinion and she always decides the changes.

>> CORRECT

One thing I want to change in my house is that install the massage machine.

>> One change I want to happen in my house is the installment of a massage machine.
There should be enough space in the living room in order to install it.

>> CORRECT

I also need to spend a lot of money to purchase it.

>> CORRECT

The machine is one of the expensive electronics at the market.

>> That machine is one of the most expensive electronics at the market.

I have been dreaming of taking a rest on the massage machine and watching TV while I am getting a massage.

>> CORRECT

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