If you could change one thing about your government, what would it be and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
The government will allow young people to live in free rental houses for 10 years if they get married and provide $500 a month for each child with an incentive to give birth.
The move is aimed at preparing for an aging society by creating an environment where young people can have many children without financial difficulties.
강사 첨삭
Hi, John. ^^
Is this policy already in action?
This sounds like a wonderful solution.
I have also noticed that the younger generation in your country don\'t like to have kids.
So I hope this policy could change that.
~t. Ally
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The government will allow young people to live in free rental houses for 10 years if they get married and provide $500 a month for each child with an incentive to give birth.
>> CORRECT!
The move is aimed at preparing for an aging society by creating an environment where young people can have many children without financial difficulties.
The move is aimed at preparing for an aging society by creating an environment where young people can have many children without financial difficulties.
>>CORRECT!
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