If you could change one thing about your neighborhood, what would that be?
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If I can do it, I want to change a neat person who is my neighborhood. The one should be good at organizing, neat, tidy person who doesn\'t put off doing housework. In addition to that, my neighborhood doesn\'t fight with their family or me. I don\'t want to blush with each other.
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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
If I can do it, I want to change a neat person who is my neighborhood.
>> If I can do it, I want to have a neat person to live in my neighborhood.
The one should be good at organizing, neat, tidy person who doesn\'t put off doing housework.
>> CORRECT!
In addition to that, my neighborhood doesn\'t fight with their family or me.
>> CORRECT!
I don\'t want to blush with each other.
>> CORRECT!
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