If you could change one thing about your past, what would it be?

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If I could change one thing about my past, I will do my best to my father. 

>>>If I could change one thing about my past, I will do my best for my father. 

My father lived separately with my family. Because he couldn\'t find his work in seoul, Korea.

>>> My father lived separately from my family because he couldn\'t find work in Seoul, Korea.

I sometimes visited his home. But it was really rare

>>> Sometimes, I visited his home but, I rarely do it.

7years ago, he had a cerebral haemorrhage and passed away.

>>>Seven years ago, he had a cerebral hemorrhage and passed away.

I didn\'t expect his dead. Because he was young, so I thought he will be okay.

>>>I didn\'t expect his death because he was young and I thought he will be okay.

If I have a chance to change past, I will have time with my father.

>>>If I have a chance to change past, I want to have more time with my father.

We don\'t have memories. That\'s why I can\'t remember anything with my father.

>>>I didn\'t have any memories with my father that\'s why I can\'t remember anything.

And if I pass away, I meet with him in the heaven.

>>>If I\'ll pass away, I can meet him in heaven.