If you could change one thing about your past, what would it be?

2019-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Selene

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When I was a middle school student, I really like to eat. If I ride a time machine, back to 14years old, I won\'t eat that much. haha.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, [이름]. Thank you for doing your homework. Great job. Continue improving your writing and grammar skills.^_^

When I was a middle school student, I really like to eat. 
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>>When I was in middle school, I really like eating.
 If I ride a time machine, back to 14years old, I won\'t eat that much.
>>>If I could ride a time machine back when I was 14 years old, I wouldn\'t eat that much.

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