If you could change one thing about your room, what would it be? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I could change one thing about my room, I would like to change the wallpaper in my room.
The wallpaper of my room in the house where my family lives is too childish. Since I changed the wallpaper when I was in elementary school, the atmosphere at that time is maintained and the color is also a color that elementary school students will like, so I want to change it to my current taste. Also, the wallpaper in my current apartment at work is too monotonous. Because most of them are white wallpaper, I want to change them to wallpaper with point or color.
강사 첨삭
Hi!
Thank you for submitting your answer to the homework I sent.
You did well in telling it. ^^
I hope you get to update the wallpaper in your room soon. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
If I could change one thing about my room, I would like to change the wallpaper in my room.
>> If I could change one thing about my room, I would change the wallpaper.
>> Or: If given the chance to alter one thing, I\'d choose to update the wallpaper.
The wallpaper of my room in the house where my family lives is too childish.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: The wallpaper in my room at home is excessively childish.
>> Or: My room\'s wallpaper at the family residence is excessively childlike.
Since I changed the wallpaper when I was in elementary school, the atmosphere at that time is maintained and the color is also a color that elementary school students will like, so I want to change it to my current taste.
>> I changed the wallpaper when I was in elementary school, and the room still maintains that atmosphere. The color is also one that only elementary school students would like, so I want to change it to match my current taste.
Also, the wallpaper in my current apartment at work is too monotonous.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: In addition, the wallpaper in my work apartment is overly plain.
Because most of them are white wallpaper, I want to change them to wallpaper with point or color.
>> Because most of the wallpaper is white, I want to change it to a design with an accent or color.
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