If you could change one thing about your warehouse what would it be ?
학생이 쓴 원문
If you could change one thing about your warehouse what would it be ?
If I could change one thing in my work,
I\'d like to say that it is dust and temperature.
As you know, I\'m always easily getting colder than other people.
So, I have to wear a jacket and sometimes feel my knees ahce as I\'m getting older and older.
However I know the products are very important than my knees in an aspect of my company.
The other one is dust. There is a lot of it in the warehouse. It can\'t be seen easily.
But I can feel from my nose and cough.
강사 첨삭
Hi Stella,
As always, thank you for taking the time to answer this essay. 🙂
I hope the issues at your workplace, especially the dust, can be addressed soon.
Please stay healthy and always take care at work!
Wishing you a less tiring day tomorrow. See you in our class. 😊
I hope the issues at your workplace, especially the dust, can be addressed soon.
Please stay healthy and always take care at work!
Wishing you a less tiring day tomorrow. See you in our class. 😊
- Teacher Elly~
>> If I could change one thing about my work, I’d say it’s the dust and the temperature.
OR >> If I could change one thing about our warehouse, I’d say it’s the dust and the temperature.
As you know, I\'m always easily getting colder than other people.
>> As you know, I get cold more easily than other people.
>> As you know, I get cold more easily than other people.
So, I have to wear a jacket and sometimes feel my knees ahce as I\'m getting older and older.
>> So, I have to wear a jacket, and sometimes I feel my knees ache as I get older.
>> So, I have to wear a jacket, and sometimes I feel my knees ache as I get older.
However I know the products are very important than my knees in an aspect of my company.
>> However, I understand that the products are more important than my knees from the company’s perspective.
>> However, I understand that the products are more important than my knees from the company’s perspective.
The other one is dust. There is a lot of it in the warehouse.
>> CORRECT
OR >> The other issue is dust. There’s a lot of it in the warehouse.
OR >> The other issue is dust. There’s a lot of it in the warehouse.
It can\'t be seen easily. But I can feel from my nose and cough.
>> It can\'t be seen easily, but I can feel it in my nose and start coughing.
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