If you could change one thing in the world, what would it be?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to delete violence all of the world.
So I want to make everyone feel peace and happiness.
Lastly, I wish there were no hungry people all of the world.
강사 첨삭
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~Teacher Sheila
>>I want to delete violence all over the world.
So I want to make everyone feel peace and happiness.
>>So, I want to make everyone feels peace and happiness.
Lastly, I wish there were no hungry people all of the world.
>>Lastly, I wish there were no hungry people all over the world.
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