If you could change one thing in the world, what would it be?

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If i change one thing of the world, maybe i will change the law of education.

>> If I can change one thing in the world, maybe I will change the law of education.
Education is very important to a human but also the nation.

>> Education is very important to humans, and also to the nations.
So education need to change be a free.

>> So education needs to be free.