If you could change one thing in the world, what would it be?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I could change one thing, I would change about education system.
The education can change future. so it\'s important factor.
I want to change the education fee will be free.
If someone want to learn something, it should be a free to learn.
강사 첨삭
Hey [이름]! I think that would be a great idea too. This can help more people get good education for their future.
~~Teacher Ryka^^
If I could change one thing, I would change about education system.
>> If I could change one thing, I would change the education system.
The education can change future. so it\'s important factor.
>> Education can change the future, so it\'s an important factor.
I want to change the education fee will be free.
>> I want to make education free.
If someone want to learn something, it should be a free to learn.
>>If someone wants to learn something, it should be free to learn.
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