If you could change the past, would you do it? Why?
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I definitely agree with your point.
All aspects of our lives are meant for us to grow.
Great composition today!
~Teacher Eve.
Many people regret their past.
>> Correct!
We don\'t deny our whole past, but we want to change some events in our life.
>> Correct!
If you have a chance to change your past, would you do it? My answer is NO.
>> Correct!
I also have an event that I\'d like to change.
>> Correct!
Sometimes I think \'I should have decided differently at that moment.\'
>> Correct!
It means I need a chance to change the past for better present and future.
>> It means that I need a chance to change the past for a better present and future.
However, I don\'t change that event.
>> However, I didn\'t change that event.
Even though I had to undergo difficulties and decided not that good choice, it made me grow up.
>> Even though I had to undergo difficulties and decided not that it\'s not a good choice, it helped me grow.
We need both good and bad experiences to improve ourselves.
>> We need both the good and the bad experiences to improve ourselves.
We usually think that bad experiences should be deleted in our life for better present.
>> We usually think that bad experiences should be deleted in our life for a better present.
However, mistakes lead us to better ways.
>> Correct!
We think about the situation deeply to solve it, and we try not to make same mistake.
>> We think about the situation deeply to solve it, and we try not to make the same mistake.
It is our growth.
>> Correct!
Therefore, even if I could change the past, I would not do it.
>> Correct!
I believe my past makes my present.
>> Correct!
Why don\'t you accept yourself and your past?
>> Correct!
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