If you could change the past, would you do it? Why?

2020-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Eve

학생이 쓴 원문

Many people regret their past. We don\'t deny our whole past, but we want to change some events in our life. If you have a chance to change your past, would you do it? My answer is NO. I also have an event that I\'d like to change. Sometimes I think \'I should have decided differently at that moment.\' It means I need a chance to change the past for better present and future. However, I don\'t change that event. Even though I had to undergo difficulties and decided not that good choice, it made me grow up. We need both good and bad experiences to improve ourselves. We usually think that bad experiences should be deleted in our life for better present. However, mistakes lead us to better ways. We think about the situation deeply to solve it, and we try not to make same mistake. It is our growth. Therefore, even if I could change the past, I would not do it. I believe my past makes my present. Why don\'t you accept yourself and your past?

강사 첨삭

I definitely agree with your point.

All aspects of our lives are meant for us to grow.

Great composition today!

~Teacher Eve.

Many people regret their past.

>> Correct!

We don\'t deny our whole past, but we want to change some events in our life.

>> Correct!

If you have a chance to change your past, would you do it? My answer is NO.

>> Correct!
 I also have an event that I\'d like to change.

>> Correct!

Sometimes I think \'I should have decided differently at that moment.\'

>> Correct!

It means I need a chance to change the past for better present and future.

>> It means that I need a chance to change the past for a better present and future.

However, I don\'t change that event.

>> However, I didn\'t change that event.

Even though I had to undergo difficulties and decided not that good choice, it made me grow up.

>> Even though I had to undergo difficulties and decided not that it\'s not a good choice, it helped me grow.
 We need both good and bad experiences to improve ourselves.

>> We need both the good and the bad experiences to improve ourselves.

We usually think that bad experiences should be deleted in our life for better present.

>> We usually think that bad experiences should be deleted in our life for a better present.

However, mistakes lead us to better ways.

>> Correct! 

We think about the situation deeply to solve it, and we try not to make same mistake.

>> We think about the situation deeply to solve it, and we try not to make the same mistake.

It is our growth.

>> Correct!
 Therefore, even if I could change the past, I would not do it.

>> Correct!

I believe my past makes my present.

>> Correct!

Why don\'t you accept yourself and your past?

>> Correct!

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·