If you could change your name would you? What would it be? Why this name?

Hello Rachel!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I wouldn\'t. Because I\'m already satisfied with my name and my parents gave me the name after thinking. 

>> I wouldn\'t because I\'m already satisfied with my name and my parents gave me my name after a lot of thought. 

My sister\'s name is Su[이름] and my name is Ye[이름]. 

>> CORRECT!

My name can show the bond with my sister.

>> My name can show the bond I have with my sister.