If you could choose a place anywhere in the world to live for a year, where would it be?
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Hi [이름]! Thank you for spending time with this homework. I appreciate the effort! ^ ^
Thanks for your thoughts too! ^ ^ Yes, I agree with you. It depends on how much money you have. If you are financially more than able, why not live in a luxurious city? The possibilities are endless! ^ ^
Nice to imagine things sometimes. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
According to how much money I can spend, a place will be different. ^^
>>The place where I would like to live depends on how much money I have and able to spend.
( How much money I have depends on the destination )????
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If I have much money and time to live one place for a year, I would live in luxurious up town city with my whole family and close friends for a year, having fancy two cars.
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I would love to explore at every corner of that ciy and some hot spots andtourist attraction near the city.
>>I would love to explore every corner of that city and some hot spots and tourist attractions near the city.
I\'m not sure where it would be.
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I need to check it out.
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Somewhere in America.
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How exciting....isn\'t it..~~
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