If you could choose a place anywhere in the world to live for a year, where would it be?

2019-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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According to how much money I can spend, a place will be different. ^^ ( How much money I have depends on the destination )???? If I have much money and time to live one place for a year, I would live in luxurious up town city with my whole family and close friends for a year, having fancy two cars. I would love to explore at every corner of that ciy and some hot spots andtourist attraction near the city. I\'m not sure where it would be. I need to check it out. Somewhere in America.How exciting....isn\'t it..~~

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for spending time with this homework. I appreciate the effort! ^ ^

Thanks for your thoughts too! ^ ^ Yes, I agree with you. It depends on how much money you have. If you are financially more than able, why not live in a luxurious city? The possibilities are endless! ^ ^

Nice to imagine things sometimes. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah 

 

According to how much money I can spend, a place will be different. ^^

>>The place where I would like to live depends on how much money I have and able to spend.

( How much money I have depends on the destination )????

>>Correct

If I have much money and time to live one place for a year, I would live in luxurious up town city with my whole family and close friends for a year, having fancy two cars.

>>Correct

I would love to explore at every corner of that ciy and some hot spots andtourist attraction near the city.

>>I would love to explore every corner of that city and some hot spots and tourist attractions near the city.

I\'m not sure where it would be.

>>Correct

I need to check it out.

>>Correct 

Somewhere in America.

>>Correct

How exciting....isn\'t it..~~

>>Correct 

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