If you could choose a place to live in, where would it be and why?
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Hello Yeong Seog! Thank you once again for this. I heard about the \"pali-pali\" culture in Korea, where people are always in a rush. I guess the reason why most retired people choose to live in the country side is because they want peace and quiet. I hope you get to live in Thailand when you retire.
- T. Beth
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I want to live in Tailand.
>>> I want to live in Thailand.
When i was a 26 years old, i have been to Bangkok, Tailand.
>>> When I was 26 years old, I have been to Bangkok, Thailand.
There is a lot of kind people, delicious food.
>>> There were a lot of kind people and delicious food.
I can feel stable.
>>> CORRECT.
>>> OR: I could feel stable.
In my sight, People of Tailand are diffrent from Korean.
>>> CORRECT.
>>> OR: From my point of view, Thai people are diffrent from Koreans.
A lot of Korean is rash.
>>> A lot of Korean are on a rush.
But people of Tailand is not rash.
>>> OR: But people of Tailand are not in a hurry.
When i will be old man, i want to go and live in Tailand with my family.
>>> When I will be an old man, I want to go and live in Tailand with my family.
>>> OR: When I retire, I want to go live in Tailand with my family.
I will be a happy without nervous.
>>> I will be happy without feeling nervous.
>>> OR: I will be happy without feeling anxious.
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