If you could choose any weather for the perfect day off, what would it be and what would you do to m

2024-08-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jewel

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I would choose sunny days with a little breeze and It\'s neithet hot nor cold I would like to feel the wind and the nature. It will make me my days

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Hello, Ju Mi! I can picture what your ideal weather would be like. ^^ Thank you for your time again today. Have a great Wednesday! 
~T. Jewel
I would choose sunny days with a little breeze and It\'s neithet hot nor cold
>>I would choose sunny days with a light breeze—neither too hot nor too cold.
I would like to feel the wind and the nature.
>>I would like to feel the breeze and enjoy nature.
It will make me my days.
>>It will make my day.

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