If you could choose where to go and what to do, how would you like to spend your long holiday?
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Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you once again for this one. I think your strategy is actually good. You could save time planning.
- T. Beth
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I would like to spend long holiday by choosing where to go.
>>> I would like to spend a long holiday choosing where to go.
Normally, I asked my girlfriend for places to enjoy holidays.
>>> CORRECT.
she answed where you want to go.
>>> She would respond by asking me where I want to go.
To save the time, I prequently fixed some places to visit there instead of finding activities because after selecting some cities, We are searching for something lke well-known restorants, museums and some special activities in that place.
>>> To save time, I frequently decide on some places to visit first instead of finding activities to do. After choosing the place, we search for famous restaurants, museums and some special activities to see and do there.
It is better to choose places to make a plan during holidays than finding what to do for me. after selcting place , when i search that cities name on the website.
>>> CORRECT.
after selcting place , when i search that cities name on the website. I can get posted pictures and contents by sns users.
>>> After selecting places to visit in the website, I can see posted pictures and contents by SNS users.
Theses information make me more comfortable.
>>> OR: These information are quite convenient.
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