If you could compare your self to anyone, who would it be and why?
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I comare self to anyone my rival because my rival is self first and bad.
But I\'m not self first and help the friend.
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Jean~~
If you could compare yourself to anyone, who would it be and why?
I comare self to anyone my rival because my rival is self first and bad.
>> I don\'t compare myself to anyone because my main rival is myself and comparing isn\'t good.
But I\'m not self first and help the friend.
>> I would rather help my friends than compare to or compete with them.
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