If you could cook a Korean dish for me, what would it be? Why?
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Hi there again Ms.[이름] [이름]!
Your homework made me very hungry. haha Actually I like eating Korean food ^__^ I even tried sundae gukbap and I loved it! I hope you will remain being optimistic. I understand that you were nervous because it was your first time to use your book today. It will probably be a bit difficult during the first few days, but trust me, with correct and constant practice, you\'ll get the hang of it. Remember: Even experts started off as beginners! I want to repeat what I said a while ago: It is important that you remember your basics, because they\'re the foundation of your sentences. If you are unsure and you still make really complex sentences, there\'s a high probability that you will make a mistake. Another thing is fluency in speaking. This is important because it shows that you understand the questions and that you are able to converse well. Don\'t be afraid of making grammatical errors, it is normal in the process of learning, just make sure you learn from them ~___~. Don\'t let it stop you from speaking. One major reason why others don\'t improve is that they stop speaking because they are afraid of making mistakes. So just talk talk talk! haha Even I make mistakes >.< Anyway, thanks again for a job well done. You\'ll definitely get there, just be patient! ~___~
~t.Karen (.-___-)
Hello keran !!!
>> Correct sentence: Hello Karen!
>> ** Actually your grammar is correct, just be careful with your spelling: \"Karen\".
>> ** Always capitalize the first letter of names. Example: Kim, Jessica and Andy.
I had a happy class with you.
>> Correct! ^^
but I coudn\'t understand what you said a little bit.
>> Correct sentence: But I couldn\'t understand what you said a little bit.
>> ** Be careful with your spelling: \"Coudln\'t\".
>> ** Always capitalize the first letter of sentences. Examples:
a. Jamie went to Canada.
b. Because he was sad, he started to cry.
I got so nervous.
>> Correct! ^^
I decided to listen to the odio file repetedly.
>> Correct grammar! ^^
>> ** Actually your grammar is correct, just be careful with your spelling: \"Audio\" and \"Repeatedly\".
I won\'t give up studying English.
>> Correct! ^^
Please help me out to achieve my goals.
>> Correct! ^^
first food,I want to cook oxtail soup (ggori-gomtang) for you.
>> Correct sentence#1: The first food I want to cook for you is oxtail soup (ggori-gomtang).
or
>>Correct sentence#2: First, I want to cook oxtail soup
(ggori-gomtang) for you.
>> ** Don\'t forget the article \"The\" because you are talking about a specific food.
It is a very nutritious and healthy food.
>> Correct! ^^
when the weather is freezing outside, my mother used to make this soup.
>> Correct sentence: When the weather is freezing outside, my mother used to make this soup.
>> Actually your grammar is correct, just make sure to capitalize the first letter of sentences. Examples:
a. Jamie went to Canada.
b. Because he was sad, he started to cry.
Making this soup is rather simple.
>> Correct! ^^
It is very time-consuming.
>> Correct! ^^
It takes time 3-4 hours to make this food.
>> Correct sentence#1: It takes 3-4 hours to make this food.
>> ** You can remove the word \"Time\" because it is already understood that \"3-4 hours\" is referring to time. Therefore, if you put the word \"time\", it would already be redundant.
It makes me healthier and invincible.
>> Correct! ^^
The color of soup is thick and white.
>> Correct sentence: The color of the soup is white and the consistency is thick.
>> ** Be specific with your adjectives, \"thick\" and \"white\" are different characteristics.
It is a very dilicious food.
>> Correct grammar! ^^
>> ** Actually your grammar is correct, just be careful with your spelling: \"delicious\".
When you have ggori-ggomtang, put some chopped green onions and touch of salt.
>> Correct sentence: When you have ggori-ggomtang, put some chopped green onions and a touch of salt.
>> ** Don\'t forget your article \"A\". Example:
a. A pinch of pepper.
b. A spoonful of sugar.
I usually put the rice into the soup and eat it together along with cripsy kimch.
>> Correct grammar! ^^
>> ** Actually your grammar is correct, just be careful with your spelling: \"Crispy\" and \"Kimchi\".
secondly, I would like to recommand bibimbob.
>> Correct sentence: Secondly, I would like to recommend bibimbap.
>> ** Actually your grammar is correct, just be careful with your spelling: \"Recommend\' and \"Bibimbap\".
>> **Actually your grammar is correct, just make sure to capitalize the first letter of sentences. Examples:
a. Jamie went to Canada.
b. Because he was sad, he started to cry.
jun-ju of bibimbob is one of korean traditional foods.
>> Correct Sentence: The bibimbap in Jeon-ju is one of Korea\'s traditional food.
>> ** Always capitalize the first letter of places. Examples: Seoul, Daegu and Busan.
>> ** Make sure to capitalize the first letter of sentences. Examples:
a. Jamie went to Canada.
b. Because he was sad, he started to cry.
This food ingredients are all kinds of vegetables,go-chu-gang,bean-sprouts,eggs and meats.
>> Correct sentence: This food\'s ingredients are different kinds of vegetables, go-chu-jang, bean sprouts, eggs and meat.
>> ** Use the possessive form \"food\'s\" to show possession.
>> ** It is better to use \"Different kinds\" rather than \"All kinds\". When you say \"All kinds\", it refers to all known vegetables.
It is easy for me to cook
>> Correct sentence: It is easy for me to cook.
>> ** Actually your grammar is correct, just remember to end your sentence with a punctuation mark. Example:
a. Help me !
b. Do you have a question ?
c. He is already here .
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