If you could cook for the President of South Korea, what dish would you prepare and why?

2020-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

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i will prepare kimchi stew because my mother\'s kimchi is very delicous but how anyone knows! really unforunate thing is other people cannot try this kimchi. poor people. i mean i\'m really proud of my mother\'s recipe and i want to tell something. the thing is please more care own the public than other contry Actually in 20~30 age the president recognition is bad, more and more bad umm i don\'t have any sentence for my presidnet thank you

강사 첨삭

Hello Prince [이름]:)

You did great in this homework:) Thanks for giving your best always:)

-Rachel

i will prepare kimchi stew because my mother\'s kimchi is very delicous but how anyone knows!

>> I will prepare kimchi stew because my mother\'s kimchi is very delicious but only a few people know that.
really unforunate thing is other people cannot try this kimchi.

>> It\'s really unfortunate that other people cannot try this kimchi.

poor people.

>> correct

>> What a pity!
i mean i\'m really proud of my mother\'s recipe

>> I am really proud of my mother\'s recipe, so people should try it.
and i want to tell something. the thing is please more care own the public than other contry

>> I also want to say something, people should care more about their own country than other nations.
Actually in 20~30 age the president recognition is bad, more and more bad

>> Actually for the 20\'s-30\'s the image of the president in Korea is bad and it is getting worse.
umm i don\'t have any sentence for my presidnet

>> So I don\'t have much to say about my President.

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